Yellow

Another one about love ❤

When I think of You,
I see gentle yellow …
bright like sunshine,
warm 'n ohhh-so
mellow.

Warmly bathing
'neath
such softly loving rays,
flowing all around me;
your never ending
ways.

Come, lover, unto me,
on a warm summer
glide,
whisp'ring love to me …
I'm safe here by your
side.

How is it I could ever,
be afraid to feel             
the potency of your beauty,
as my heart ~ you swiftly
steal.

Revised with thanks to Richard W Jenkins

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

i do love the color and the word yellow:) this is a short, sweet and sincere poem with a pretty lyrical quality! nice to meet you amber i enjoyed this I am instantly drawn to the word yellow like a moth to flame its a long story... er... poem too.

[Sarah K Cass]

Thank you, Bad Bunny! This poem is under review but I think in its raw form it hit a mark. And now I'm intrigued about your attraction to yellow.

[Relic]

Warm and mellow are great words to describe love. :)

[Sarah K Cass]

Thank you. I think so too x

[Richard🖌]

Nice, Sarah : )
Love poems are closest to my heart, and this one is so gentle and sweet.
The imagery sings and the story is palpable, as the timbre's warm and inviting.
With a bit of spit and polish, this one could really dance.

This was writ with a happy pen … thanks for sharing! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Sarah K Cass]

Thank yiu Richard. I'd be interested to see your spit n polish if you've a mind and a minute.

[Richard🖌]

For You, always!
Gimme a bit to polish-off what I'm involved in at the moment, and I'll see to it for ya.

[Sarah K Cass]

And live poems are close to my heart too. I'm just drawn to them and writing them.

[Richard🖌]

I have one up you should read: "How you'll know I Love You"
It's the second one down on my list.

[Sarah K Cass]

I meant love not live poems. Lol

[Richard🖌]

I am fluent in the language of Amber … LOL!

[Sarah K Cass]

Ha ha, just as well you understood!

[Gee]

I have that effect on women, nothing I can do about it. I should really come with a government health warning
" DANGER, THIS MAN MAY WELL MAKE YOU DAMP"....or not :)
Another nicely written poem SessyK

[Sarah K Cass]

Your comment made me smileon this sunny Sunday (yellow) morning.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very smooth in delivery...somewhat straightforward but effective.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfect use of words and thoughts. You gave the color purpose and reason. I enjoyed the complete poem. Wonderful ending to the outstanding poetry Sessy.
Coyote

[LE Berry]

Visual emotion...very nice SessyK.

[Chris Shaw]

There is much warmth in this love poem SessyK. Nicely conveyed composition.

Chris