Vital force

Life itself is an ever- changing portrait.
The frame remains as it is..,
only the content gets altered; 
very clinically, by the 'Ultimate Artist' high above..!
Every night , a magnificent magician comes down silently ,
to edit the area inscribed in the frame.
When the morning beams peep in, 
we get to see a totally new picture altogether..!!
New colors keep on mesmerizing us every single day, 
every single moment.
This very amazement drives our life,
This element of surprise fosters
the "Imaginative Horses" inside our dynamic minds,
our eternal souls;
Here lies the auspicious secret of the " Vital force".

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Excellent write, the vital force is in constant momentum and changing life second to second, if we can put our soul to the editor and make a melody conjointly, wow a heaven on earth, but world is in pandemonium and too nosy, you have to be a keen listener of your soul to be one with the inner vital force, enjoyed fully

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear, for the kind review :)

[Rosaria_V]

This was really a lovely read!!! I love your style and just how the words come to life

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot dear. how are you doing?

[Rosaria_V]

well thank you! Hope your doing well :)

[Michelle N. H.]

I just love the opening. "Life itself is an ever-changing portrait. The frame remains as it is, only the content gets altered". On that I do agree. Great write, I enjoyed it.

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much my dear friend :)

[kublakhan27]

An uplifting and visionary piece of philosophy...well done :)

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much for the kind review :)

[MikeV]

Beautiful imagery! I really enjoyed the read :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you friend :)

[Saumya]

wow..:) that was really wonderful to be read:)
i could clearly imagine every single word clearly in this:)

i agree, there truly is a vital force that helps us dive deeply through life....
everyday comes with its own joys, pain worries and tensions
but all that makes it later really remarkable is its presence and later rememberance:)

and GOD the creatotr is truly a wonderful artist, who knows how to make people completely busy with it:)
and
"the "Imaginative Horses" inside our dynamic minds,
our eternal souls;
Here lies the auspicious secret of the " Vital force"."

a completely wonderful read and write:)
well done:)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you so much Saumya, for your kind words :D

[Saumya]

you r highly welcmd :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Each day is a new beginning...I like that concept very much! Beautiful imagery throughout your well written poem and the spirituality is soft....I liked it. Lydi**

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot Lydi . Yes, indeed spirituality keeps us softened :)

[MsJewel]

The imagery in this well written, uplifting poem is lovely. Very creative and a delight to read. :) Julie

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot dear :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

nice and positive... awesome...

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you Prachi :)

[Rhiti Bose]

Now here's a poem of yours that I have fallen in love with. beautiful and brilliant. "Life itself is an ever- changing portrait.".... such true words.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you so much Ma'am for kind words :) :)