Realization 3

Right from day of my birth
I kept acquiring the doses
 of knowledge ,
with a view to becoming
 a sensible human being.

Indeed I've grown up,
but as a seasoned actor;
One who is quite cautious and keen
about the expressions to be displayed;
One who is original , yet not real at all.

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

"one who is quite cautious and keen
about the expressions to be displayed;
One who is original, yet not real at all"

wow...what a brilliant realization... it is hard i think for anyone to be real these days. For when you do open up and let out your true self, it just opens your heart up to be broken. Wonderfully wise words ...wonderful write!

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear for the kind review ! yeah facades rule the roost now.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

very true... :)

[EloisaWrites]

Wow! Your words took my breath away! This is some insightful write that you've got, Anand. It speaks of a very realistic scenario of growing up and being human.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks again dear, for the kind comments :)

[Linda alexander]

One who is original , yet not real at all.

Wow great write and very thought provoking too, the awareness that not fully aware or not at all aware of ourselves is a huge mile stone for self improvement and exploration of potentials, at times the entire life itself is the journey to find true self, all the steps we take has to start some where which is the awareness that I do not know myself, even if we find ourself sometimes very hard to live as ourselves and on our dreams, excellent point, congrats

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear for the time you spent on this piece. I am honored :)

[Morgan Storms]

"with a view to becoming
a sensible human being."
my favorite line. Thanks for writing all of your realizations, I like them!

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot my dear friend :)

[Blue]

You expressed the predicaments of most people, Anand. You penned this brilliantly!

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so much dear Blue for the kind review :)

[TPK Stories]

Some questions I often ask myself. Beautifully written.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot Leena for the kind review

[magenta24uk]

Original yet not real at all. What a wonderful line. A good solid piece. I like it a lot.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so much dear :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

I know that 'not real' feeling. I think it is something we all suffer from, from time to time. Well written poem

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so very much !

[Praveeta]

Losing the liberty to be the real you. A wonderful write.

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much dear :) how are you doing?

[Praveeta]

You are most welcome talented poet. I am good thanks.