December Morning

Just wrote what my heart said !

Why was my heart beating so fast ?

Why was i humming to random songs ?

Why was i smiling for no reason?

Why? Why?Why?

Even the dew seemed crystal clear

Even the breeze seemed to whisper a secret

Even the plants seemed to do ballroom

That December morning,

Even the nature seemed to be happy.

There was something special happening

I started tasting happiness

I started tasting joy

I started tasting love !

What was happening ?

Why was it happening ?

What for was it happening ?

You came, sat near me

and smiled at me 

That exquisite smile spoke a million words,

Those enchanting eyes told me just one thing:

"I'll be there for you,

Forever and always !"

 

But this December morning,

Even the nature seems to be gloomy.

My heart is not fluttering anymore,

It has been broken.

Smile seems to avoid me.

There is no more gleam in my eyes,

Only dark circles to be seen.

I can only taste sorrow , grief

And isolation.

I am shattered into pieces ,

As i see you with another lucky girl,

Giving her the same smile you gave me...

Giving her the same promises you gave me...

Reviews

[Ghivarghese]

Lovely portrayal of emotions.Its a good one.

[Anjana]

Thnx Ghi :D

[Confuser]

Anjana: Your heartfelt words are simply devine. You blew me away and made me smile, feeling through your well written descriptions and imagery pure bliss and love: Remembering new first love through your vivid imagery; the pure joy exuded mind blowing emotions and then the heartbreak. The harder we love, the harder we fall. What a beautiful writing. You are so talented. I can taste, sorrow, grief isolation: what meloncholy. I love love love it! Thank you so very much! So glad Joel asked me to read. Dale

[Anjana]

Thanks a lot for your compliments,dale

[Confuser]

You're welcome!

[ANTO]

The way I see it that there was maybe more to the Don Juans behaviour. Im playing devils advocate here but perhaps the protaganist in this was playing it too cool and giving the impression they never wanted the antagonist until he decided to move on. As I say - playing devils advocate.
The poem itself is wonderful in its simplicity and I can imagine it being a journal entry in the journal of a broken heart.
Well written Anjana Francis - thank you Joel for the RR for this one :))

[Joel Armstrong]

very well written .absolutely love it.dis is by far one of my favorite workss.it tells a clear story.nice imagery.
more power to ur pen sis.keep writing more