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Garden

Garden

A Poem by Arundass TP
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Here garden is busy

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Daisies and roses
Lillies and marigold
Cosmos and lavender
Lotus and others.

Blooms in my garden
With grasses and trees
Where birds flock together
Squirrel's and Hamsters on the move.

Ripened fruits spreads all-around
In a wooden basket grapes are of plenty
Bee's swarm around the basket.
To taste the sweetness of grapes.

Cow's, Goat's and pig's
Swans, C***s and hens
Cuckoos compose their music
For the next days sunrise.

Garden is a busy place
Where grass hoppers dances
Dung beetles role their love
On all season's around the year.

If someone knows the reality of himself
Where there is no garden around
He is a dead walking toy
In the graveyard he created.

© 2023 Arundass TP


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Dear Arundass
It was pleasant to read your poem.
Thanks for sharing
The garden seems like the Eden garden.
The message could be living naturally with creatures God created and living together in harmony with
nature. The sense of living on Earth.
This beautiful garden could be also a metaphor for the richness of the spiritual life and for understanding
of the World
Thank



Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊



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Beautiful images of the joys in a garden. Nature can uplift the spirits. The natural world is a soother when chaos comes calling. Lovely description Arundass.

Chris

Posted 7 Months Ago


Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend for reading 😊
Your love for beautiful flowers is evident as you paint a lovely picture of the flowers that surround you.
The last stanza is interesting as you bring the life of the garden to man-if he has not the joy of such beauty, he is but one in a graveyard of emptiness without that which brings joy.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend for reading 😊
Very well depicted scene filled with natures joys!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend for reading 😊
Extremely well written and very well presented indeed, I loved it and really enjoyed going through this poem 👍

Posted 7 Months Ago


Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
"Dung beetles role their love" that is such a fascinating line in this colorful sequence. We need gardens and their beauty to feel alive.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Very fine final stanza.

Winston

Posted 7 Months Ago


Arundass TP

7 Months Ago

Thank you friend. I have a beautiful bushes and garden around my home.

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Added on October 17, 2023
Last Updated on October 17, 2023
Tags: Nature, garden

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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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