When the final bell rings

It may happen in future

When the final bell rings
The ocean starts climbing the land
Swallowing every thing on route
Smashing and throwing the hardest obstacles.

When the final bell rings
The air shows its terrific blow
To blow everything and anything on route
Smashing and blockades are blown away.

When the final bell rings
Earth starts dancing, shaking souls
To throw everything in the air
Smashing and throwing everything to dust.

When the final bell rings
The hot devil's crawls out to the surface
Covering the heaven's with darkness, trembling the earth
Converting everything into ashes on the way.

When the final bell rings
Great fire's appear from nowhere
Burning everything to ashes
Burning and purifying all inventions.

When the final bell rings
Sun will never appear in the morning
Moon will hide behind the wall
The earth concludes its final episode.

When the final bell rings
No where I see myself
No where I see anyone
No where I see anything.

When the final bell rings
Life is worth more than money
Life is something precious than gold
But all are just a memory of the past.

Reviews

[Sara Mercury]

"Don't hear the bell, but you answer the call..."

Very vivid descriptions. You describe the earth being destroyed by fire, earthquakes, and destruction caused by tornadoes/hurricanes/derechos and by evil itself.

I like it.

You can't have so much negative energies being spewed out into the universe from this marble planet without it coming back upon us in the form of natural disasters. It's almost as though the Earth itself is "groaning" in agony.

Keep up the great work!

Sara...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[ROSALIND]

I get the sense that this poem conveys the last days I like the rhythm and the way you blended in the sentiments of dreaded call ..lovely work enjoyed you make the reader think about being right with God .thanks

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[DIVYA]

Different experiences for different souls, perhaps. Yet we a must wait for that final bell to ring. An interesting poem, dear Arun

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Dave Brown]

The stupidity of mankind
Amazing how destructive we can be
perhaps AI will survive to clean up the hole mess

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[FGFRANKLIN]

The earth will probably survive but the human race is doomed by its own actions and activities. "When the final bell rings" there won't be anyone left to answer. I enjoyed the read. F.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊

[Chris Shaw]

The repetition works well here. A topic in many minds currently. If it happens on my watch I just hope the end is mercifully quick. Thought provoking and scary ATP. Descriptive stanzas, most enjoyed.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading

[red93]

Very interesting Work ATP, well put together and expressed ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend for reading 😊

[Shelley Warner]

Very apocalyptic and descriptive.

[Arundass TP]

Thanks friend for reading

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Frost talks about fire and ice at the end...many discuss which way we will end. You hit us with all of them at once...no reprieve when this happens...we are goners.
j.

[Arundass TP]

There can be more options. Astroid is one. Merciless use of Nuclear bombs by countries at war. Shift in earth's magnetism. Sun....are other few. Even life goes on. These all are just imagination than prediction. Thanks friend for reading

[Scott888]

This is an excellent poem. I love how you are able to describe the way the world is going to end in a unique way with the mention of the final bell. The lessons you describe at the are very powerful and it hits home with me. The way you describe the way the earth is going to end talking about episodes like our lives are just a television show. This is a great poem and in every stanza there is something that you do amazingly to entice the reader, keep up the great work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend for reading 😊