Killer dog

Killer dog on one Saturday night
Sings a song for lovers love
Killer dog on one Sunday night
Wrote a song for lovers dine
Killer dog on one Monday night
Read a song for lovers glow
Killer dog on one Tuesday night
Walked around for lovers sound
Killer dog on one Wednesday night
Ran around for lovers scent
Killer dog on one Thursday night
Jumped high for lovers view
Killer dog on one Friday night
Ran around for lovers blood.


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Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

A killer dog madly chasing the image of love in a self-sufficient cycle that feeds on angst and desires, perhaps I know a figure or two in distant history who do the same thing. Even if such behaviours and actions are truly dangerous, their nature can be romanticised into an unyielding obsession with love itself -- Which has many intriguing allures that even the commonfolks can resonate with or even dream of to a certain degree. The words and verses themselves are meant to paint a scene, and from that scene we detect the meaning, oh what such depths -- For the readers' minds boggle over such a work, some may just turn into mad dogs in the process, but isnt't that quite what you have intended, author Arundass TP? Wonderfully clever in your writing game, you made another intriguing read, my friend. I wish you a good day.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Op.T.o0T]

fantastic writing style !

[Arundass TP]

Welcome. Friend ❤️

[Coyote Poetry]

Killer and seeking love. Two sides of the coin. Nice movement of thoughts. I wonder does a mad Dog, can win? I liked the directness of the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Masked writer]

Oooo I like this very interesting

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Op.T.o0T]

Fantastic writing style !!(^*)

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

I love this, but I'm at a lost to word's, not because I don't underestimate the write, no on the contrary there's 3 ways you see a dog, love how you bought the words together for me to see that way first ago is a homeboy, road dog Then there's you're my dog but I never like dogs, now cats are cool but you will one bad cat, you're a cool cat I enjoyed this writing in more ways than one, lol.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

This poor dog was jealous of this loving couple and wanted to be a part of the fun…nut he got frustrated with no attention that he either decided to maim them or kill them, an animal instinct fairly common….sure,y a surprise ending.
Warmly,
B.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!
Happy Holidays
Warmly
B.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

oh wow, Arundass TP, that is an earthly one,
great writ, ---Maynard.

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend 😊

[Neville]

Killer dog clearly leads a very busy life and would appear determined to obtain a sample or taste or specimen of lovers blood .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Sure, Thank you friend 😊

[Gnaughm]

Powerful poem, even though the title tells you what to expect.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[William Propsner]

As a dog lover, my opinion of your poem 'Killer Dog' may not be a good one. Although your wording is spot on, I don't understand the true meaning that you are trying to convey.
Sorry Arundass, like I told you once before, i'm not into poetry. Your poem truly does have a meaning, however, i got lost in the 'angst' of the creature's mind.
Keep writing

[Arundass TP]

It's just imagination. It's psychology of hate evolved out of rejection by a lover. This poem has nothing to do with real canines.

[Arundass TP]

Killer dog is just a trait inside all of us. Photo given is not important.

[Writergurl]

Kind of sad really, but cleverly written.

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend 😊