Killer dog

Killer dog on one Saturday night
Sings a song for lovers love
Killer dog on one Sunday night
Wrote a song for lovers dine
Killer dog on one Monday night
Read a song for lovers glow
Killer dog on one Tuesday night
Walked around for lovers sound
Killer dog on one Wednesday night
Ran around for lovers scent
Killer dog on one Thursday night
Jumped high for lovers view
Killer dog on one Friday night
Ran around for lovers blood.


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Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

A killer dog madly chasing the image of love in a self-sufficient cycle that feeds on angst and desires, perhaps I know a figure or two in distant history who do the same thing. Even if such behaviours and actions are truly dangerous, their nature can be romanticised into an unyielding obsession with love itself -- Which has many intriguing allures that even the commonfolks can resonate with or even dream of to a certain degree. The words and verses themselves are meant to paint a scene, and from that scene we detect the meaning, oh what such depths -- For the readers' minds boggle over such a work, some may just turn into mad dogs in the process, but isnt't that quite what you have intended, author Arundass TP? Wonderfully clever in your writing game, you made another intriguing read, my friend. I wish you a good day.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Op.T.o0T]

fantastic writing style !

[Arundass TP]

Welcome. Friend ❤️

[Chris Shaw]

Lyrical lines here. The repetition works well and the meaning I found to be menacing Arundass. Quite a dark write my friend.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Sorry friend I will make ending happier later. Thank you for comment.

[Arundass TP]

Because it's a killer dog.

[Chris Shaw]

Ha, don’t take any notice of me!!! I like everything you write.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Welcome. Have a great day 😘

[Ken e Bujold]

Every dog has its day. Or at least I have. enjoyable poem here A. solid rhythm, aided by the relentless repetition of Killer Dog. On first read, its a fun poem, on the 2nd it gets a little darker in tone, which is the sign of a good poem. each reading brings new insights

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Dave Brown]

I wonder if the musical rhyme would be affected if killer dog considered sleeping through a night once each week
Just a thought
Friend

[Arundass TP]

Sure, I can think also like that. Thank you friend

[W. Barrett Munn]

I read this and thought I’d already commented but guess I forgot. I thought the choice killer dog interesting as it implies a domesticated animal acting out of character so it has a built in hard edge to it with the repetition.

Winston

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

Every dog has his day
Nice poem.

[Arundass TP]

Sure.. thank you friend 😊

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome 😊.

[Sami Khalil]

Who let the dogs out, who, who???

[Matthew Kult]

Killer dog seeking lovers attention.

Good read.

With love

Matthew

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

WOW! there is some strong imagery in this write,
This is really good.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Killer imagery. Seems like a song in the making.
Very lyrical. Easy to get swept up the words.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Sure. I wrote it like a song. Thanks.