I am an idiot

I am an idiot

A Poem by Arundass TP
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In my own world

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I am an idiot
sitting on the branch
Cutting same branch
For the sake of log of wood.

I am an idiot
Sitting in front of bears cave
Singing a beautiful song
Looking the beauty of bear.

I am an idiot
Walking over a slippery rock
Pretending to be brave
To show my bravery to others.

I am an idiot
Loving memories of no use
Dreaming to be worth always
Writing epics about oneselves.

I am an idiot
Buying worthless decoratives
Life never needs
To fill the jar with honey.

I am an idiot
Sitting in my own world
Thinking about worthless colors
Life sketched in the past

© 2024 Arundass TP


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"I am an idiot
Sitting in front of the bears cave
Singing a beautiful song
Looking [for?] the beauty of bear"

A perfect example of putting want before need. Sure, I'd love to to make friends with a bear, but I also understand that the bear wouldn't understand my sweet songs. It isn't the nature of the bear. It's going to protect it's space and eat meat.

This is a wonderful piece, friend.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

4 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊



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"I am an idiot
Sitting in front of the bears cave
Singing a beautiful song
Looking [for?] the beauty of bear"

A perfect example of putting want before need. Sure, I'd love to to make friends with a bear, but I also understand that the bear wouldn't understand my sweet songs. It isn't the nature of the bear. It's going to protect it's space and eat meat.

This is a wonderful piece, friend.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

4 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
First of all you are not an idiot; you just wrote a beautiful poem.... some people damn themselves, perhaps to get attention or to prove they can do a heroic task.... that may be stupid.... to me, it may be a sign of self worth and what one thinks of themselves,because they don't love themselves enough, don't put themselves up to snuff...yet no one is really an idiot.. that term should be out of the dictionary....learn to love yourself then the term "idiot" won't come to mind...
Warmly, B

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Idiocy, AKA the Human Condition.
Good read Arundass!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
the opening: I am an idiot sitting on a branch is as good an opening line as I have read in quite some time Arundass.





Posted 5 Months Ago


Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Being an idiot isn't always a fault for humanity itself is the embodiment of idiocy of the earthly nature. It created and nurtured us, a species that has repeatedly ravaged its body, soul and other children but still, there are moments we make it proud with our achievements. Being an idiot and recognising such faults is the cycle of a human life. I hope you understand that, friend. Thank you for sharing your work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
No not an idiot
You/we just see thing different to others

Naturalist watch animals in the wild . at safe distances

Just be you and be happy
Let the people who think they are clever go and be how you are

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Brilliant work. Superb thought.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Not an idiot at all to enjoy the things around you and memories ... just a very sensitive soul..

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
an idiot or an optimist?...
looking at the positive so strongly that the inevitable negative is before you.
one may say idiot ~ i say dreamer.
{the world lacks the idea of being positive. inspiring write.}

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend
Many people are idiots indeed; they seek vain things instead of valuable things.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

5 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Sami Khalil

5 Months Ago

You are welcome sir.

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Added on January 25, 2024
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Arundass TP
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Thalassery, Kerala, India



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