The Eyes

The Eyes

A Poem by Arundass TP
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Of dreams

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Someone looks
Somewhere they sit
With Glowing eyes
The fire within burns.

Some have two
Some have three and some four
Some carries six and some eight
Hundreds or millions, billions or trillions.

Just glowing fire from within
Sees rainbow of trillions and infinite hues
Within infinite canvas spreading
Just to put colors of heaven infinite.

When the eyes are closed
A blanket of darkness was covered
Over the canvas, the colors are dreams
Never seen until you open the doors of heaven.​

© 2024 Arundass TP


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When you close your eyes to the heavens, yes it is dark, but open them, and you'll see trillions of lights sprouting form stars, comets, the moon, and all that is in the heavens.... the cosmos is wildly imaginative....pure colors like a fine painting...the eyes see it all and they are enlightened by the universe....
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Betty Hermelee

2 Months Ago

You're very welcome TP,
Warmly, B



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I always think I of the stars in the heavens, as eyes looking down on earth. A lovely creative write Arundass. Most enjoyed.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Thank you friend 😊😊
Great poem, metaphor justifies the intent.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Arundass TP

1 Week Ago

Thank you friend 😊
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mou
Infinity has magic! It gives the wings to our wildest imagination. I like how you play with the dimension while giving colors to the imagery.
- mou

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Eyes are like stars ,they twinkle and entice.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Sure. Eyes are windows to see light. Thank you friend
Wow I could with many interpretations the eyes makes a woman but you're not that, as boxers you know where hit comes from, but that's not what this write means, it what we see, I enjoyed this read.thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Mauricio Montoya

1 Month Ago

You're welcome and have a blessed day my friend.
The eyes have it. And the motion is carried. I enjoyed your "look" at the "windows of the soul".

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Eyes are certainly a wonderful gift
Is their anything more fulfilling than lying back on a wide open grassy field, head in hands and looking up into a clear night sky to see the gazillions of stars above stretching from horizon to horizon

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend
When you close your eyes to the heavens, yes it is dark, but open them, and you'll see trillions of lights sprouting form stars, comets, the moon, and all that is in the heavens.... the cosmos is wildly imaginative....pure colors like a fine painting...the eyes see it all and they are enlightened by the universe....
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Betty Hermelee

2 Months Ago

You're very welcome TP,
Warmly, B
This is an amazing write here

Posted 2 Months Ago


Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Isn't the universe absolutely wonderful?

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arundass TP

2 Months Ago

Sure, Universe is really wonderful.

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Added on February 17, 2024
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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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