Rejection

Rejection

A Poem by Jordan Smith
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This was just published in the Inkling Creative Arts 2016 Magazine Volume 26 at Lone Star College-Tomball.

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Rejection
The Mind can adjust
The Bones can replenish
But the Heart
Can Not Rebuild

© 2016 Jordan Smith


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thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under with meaning comp
i love this
i believe the heart can rebuild with the right love support and faith
it may never be the same exactly still broken but beating on a stronger different drum
this makes me think of the bee gees song "how can u mend a broken heart"
well done thanks for entry into my 5 lines under comp

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your review & I was glad that I could enter it into your contest :)



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Gee
Resilient us humans, the heart mends but the mind never forgets,once bitten....


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan Smith

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Gee!
thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under with meaning comp
i love this
i believe the heart can rebuild with the right love support and faith
it may never be the same exactly still broken but beating on a stronger different drum
this makes me think of the bee gees song "how can u mend a broken heart"
well done thanks for entry into my 5 lines under comp

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your review & I was glad that I could enter it into your contest :)
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Heart is constructed in such way that if broken once never gonna be back at place again....Almighty's tremendous creation!
Always take care of your heart we should..☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan Smith

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Tahsin.Z! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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6 Years Ago

You're heartedly welcome :)
I'm always a little envious of those who can express so much in so few words. I can feel the pain in this every time I read it, and that's just my style.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan Smith

8 Years Ago

Thank You Christina :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this one.
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this is probably the best thing i've ever read on rejection. so short but you couldn't have said it any better

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jordan Smith

8 Years Ago

Thank You Madeline :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Hey, could you by chance review my "Helpless" po.. read more
Reality ! How to heal the heart then :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet, but it gets the message across perfectly! Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahh yes it does hurt to be rejected and it is hard to adjust sometimes ^^ but cheer up, it does get better over time, we just got to learn not to dwell in the past and look forward to new opportunities (I have to remind myself this as well lol)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lovely write. The heart takes a lot of time to regain some of its strength after a blow, but even if it recovers, there will be scars. Thank you for sharing this fine piece.


Insight.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job i like. Keep writing 😊

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jordan Smith
Jordan Smith

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28-year old former poet trying to maybe get back into the world of writing. Slowly trying to find that part of me again while healing my heart. more..

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