thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under with meaning comp
i love this
i believe the heart can rebuild with the right love support and faith
it may never be the same exactly still broken but beating on a stronger different drum
this makes me think of the bee gees song "how can u mend a broken heart"
well done thanks for entry into my 5 lines under comp
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you for your review & I was glad that I could enter it into your contest :)
thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under with meaning comp
i love this
i believe the heart can rebuild with the right love support and faith
it may never be the same exactly still broken but beating on a stronger different drum
this makes me think of the bee gees song "how can u mend a broken heart"
well done thanks for entry into my 5 lines under comp
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you for your review & I was glad that I could enter it into your contest :)
Heart is constructed in such way that if broken once never gonna be back at place again....Almighty's tremendous creation!
Always take care of your heart we should..☺
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks for the review Tahsin.Z! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I'm always a little envious of those who can express so much in so few words. I can feel the pain in this every time I read it, and that's just my style.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank You Christina :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this one.
this is probably the best thing i've ever read on rejection. so short but you couldn't have said it any better
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank You Madeline :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Hey, could you by chance review my "Helpless" po.. read moreThank You Madeline :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Hey, could you by chance review my "Helpless" poem and tell me what you think about that? I might be doing a workshop with that poem at school.
Ahh yes it does hurt to be rejected and it is hard to adjust sometimes ^^ but cheer up, it does get better over time, we just got to learn not to dwell in the past and look forward to new opportunities (I have to remind myself this as well lol)
A lovely write. The heart takes a lot of time to regain some of its strength after a blow, but even if it recovers, there will be scars. Thank you for sharing this fine piece.