Maybe We Weren't Meant To Stay Together

Maybe we weren’t meant to stay together

Flashbacks to moments frozen in time

Eyes speak the words we are longing to say

Pleading for one more kiss goodbye

Flashbacks to moments frozen in time

Songs bringing tears at every note

Pleading for one more kiss goodbye

There’s so much left unsaid

Songs bringing tears at every note

Not a day goes by where I don’t wish for a different ending

The ghost of your lips on mine haunts my dreams

No one tells you that pain doesn’t fade for awhile

Replaying the night ‘I Love You’ was whispered

Time passes whether or not you want it to

No one tells you that pain doesn’t fade for awhile

Promises lay broken on the floor

Time passes whether or not you want it to

Forever ended within a matter of months

Promises lay broken on the floor

Waiting for the day when you don’t cross my mind



Forever ended within a matter of months

Keeping up with our old friends for news

Waiting for the day when you don’t cross my mind

Not all who try succeed

Keeping up with our old friends for news

Nothing will ever be simple again

Not all who try succeed

Maybe we weren’t meant to stay together

Reviews

[Karmee]

WOW!! I really enjoyed this write,
has depth and feeling. I enjoyed this

[revalatia]

Instead of just a review of your poem.. I'll just say to you.. you write very honestly..and speak volumes to those who can hear it silently.. I like your work! Rock on, dude :)

[barleygirl]

I'm not a fan of poetic forms that require repeating lines just for the sake of repeating lines. Other than this seemingly unnecessary repetition, I like everything else about the way you've expressed this situation with clarity & sincerity. I like the title & the way it doesn't sound angry or accusatory, but just simply stating acceptance. Your expressions are mostly conversational, rather than crafted & poetic (not a critique, just an observation). I think everything said here is very relatable & we've all felt this way.

[Inject Positivity]

I think it's an universal truth of love, I can exactly feel the feelings you have shared because I have been there... It's like every single song are pointed towards us when we lose our love, the pain is unforgettable and unbearable... It's a sad and emotional write with a power to leave the reader with a thoughts to think about... Excellent job frnd... God bless you... Some relationships indeed doesn't meant to be together...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Zaliodir]

Beautiful, emotional poem. Thank you for letting us all read it. =)

[Aphy!]

I could relate to this piece. I've been there countless times and those very same emotions produced beautiful poetry as well. I guess we learn and get inspired from our past experiences hey.
Beautiful poem, keep it up
Aphy!

[That Guy]

could relate! keep it coming!!!