ZODIAC LOVer

ZODIAC LOVer

A Poem by MS. BABy
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A HOT STAR RIDE or IS IT?

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Zodiac LOVer
 
Filtered,
Granules,
…….Heated;
Provides growth and swelling
Dictates a yearning….
My Beta
…….to
Your Alpha
Secular idioms and jargon
Fail to define by the naked
…….I
What exist
…Co-ejaculation…

Verbiage penetrates
My nucleus
Droplets condense
…….I dispense
Suspense and offer no recompense
For the thrill given-
A comet driven expulsion
…And
I ride its tail
Frail but sturdy

A Bilateral NINE
Elliptical LINE
…Can enter and conquer
And define
What a Prime Modal is…

Extending your mass
…I clasp its twinkling light
As if it gives me more
Life
&
Pleasure feel

The disproportionate measure
...regurgitate A mental
Zodiac of us…
My water flows
...and…
Grows yours
Twin lust
My air bears barometric pressure
Expectorate me inside
…of the universe and
Give quadratic blessings
I implode and explode simultaneously

…To love me is not to contain
But frame and arrange with care
Deliver me …
Exorcise my love
Gazer beware
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
BABy ©2009

 

 

© 2011 MS. BABy


Author's Note

MS. BABy
I love the sky, the universe.....I dare to dream...to love to lust to desire....whatever your cerebellum conspires.....

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thank u so much

Posted 12 Years Ago


I too love the scene of the stars and the interest of space. Interesting poem here, beautiful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


thank u poeticvixen

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is the dream...paint on

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank u so much Ness of Love...

Posted 12 Years Ago


"…To love me is not to contain
But frame and arrange with care"
-These lines really spoke to me. This whole poem had a nice flow and using all these technical sciencey terms was a smart thing to do.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank u Jibey I too shall be back to consume ur mental palate....I am humbled

Posted 12 Years Ago


Clever use of all thse astonomical and scientific terms to creat a poem of desire and pleasure.... 'my water flows.. and grows yours'... Yes

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hello Alexander...thank u so much for ur lovely comments, and I am glad to meet you

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is absolutely amazing. The words that you use to describe everything it gives it this great scientific feel that enhances the voice. It flowed amazingly. I'm mesmerized.:)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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MS. BABy
MS. BABy

San FRANCISCO, CA



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