As one

This may be the end
Or the beginning
Of a life time journey through the inevitable
Everything changing at the blink of an eye
Everyone going without a goodbye
Can things change without hurt?
Can things get better as we grow?
The life of us is undetermined
Please just show some light
With the gloom fogging up the world
My father brought me up well
As well as others
However people don't listen to the wise words of the tellers
Ignoring everything of their upbringing
My hope goes to a world of peace
However that only happens with us beings
Come together as one
Protect each other as one
Give to each other as one
We can only do this as one

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

beautiful poem, with such power and meaning behind the words.
It is true that the world can be a cold crawl place, so everyone should stick together to pull though the hard times.
I enjoyed this poem and the message within it.
Good job keep on writing :)

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you so much for the nice review :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome :)

[Skib]

I LOVED THIS!!! "People don't listen to the wise words of the tellers" no they do not and as a result are unprepared for life. We can all do this as one :) #unity#

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :)

[Skib]

You are more than welcome :) Thank YOU :p :)

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Lol :) :) :)

[emmajoy]

Such a heartfelt poem, written gently, Could so easily be sung as an anthem, or, whispered whispered into the air: shared.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you for the nice review! :)

[Nwang]

Excellent poem, but the first few lines is what drew me in. Beautifully constructed,its like you have read everyone's thoughts and expressed them in words. Great poem.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you so much! :)

[The Nude Writer]

Isn't it amazing how life can change so quickly? I loved the first line. A lovely way to start. This is a beautiful poem :)

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you so much. Life can change so quickly and I learned that quickly while I was growing up.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

"This may be the end
Or the beginning
Of a life time journey through the inevitable
Everything changing at the blink of an eye
Everyone going without a goodbye
Can things change without hurt?
Can things get better as we grow?"

Those lines just so eloquently ask that haunting question - Why can't things stay the same? You've asked that so brilliantly and the rest of the poem so perfectly answers by saying nothing stays the same and we can't control change but we can control how we deal with it and get through it and that's only by staying as one.

That was just perfect. You did an amazing job with writing this. You have true talent. Thank you for sharing this, Lauren :)

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you so very much for the review! :)