Taylor Made

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Jealousy stems
In unlikely places
Masked parade
Hides a thousand faces
Mark my life
With years of hatred
Killing me softly
Seeing your merciless faces
~*~
Nothing more than a shadow
You claim to be
Some shadow
Swooping in on me
Holding me tightly
Refusing to let go
Holding my place
In your horror show
~*~
I am not a puppet
Your games won’t last
Your nothing more
A trinket in his past
The fight is over
Respect isn’t due
You hold nothing
But deceit in you
~*~
Play innocent
She taught you her ways
I am here to tell you
I don’t feel any shame
Rip apart my family
If that’s what you dare to do
Learn to love
I’m challenging you
~*~
You will not get him back
Your barking up the wrong tree
Leave us alone
He is happy with me
You blew your chance
I’m holding it back
Don’t worry
This won’t be my last
~*~
Heartfelt rhyme
Kills slowly inside
Rip you to shreds
While your unconscious in bed
My words can be daggers
Triggered at will
Don’t doubt me
My words could kill

Author's Note

Listen Hunny, I don't know where in the hell you get off, but I will tell you something. I am not somebody to be fucked with. Mess with me and I'll fuck you up mentally and physically.

Reviews

[Eile MacIntyre]

Very intense, I think. Love it!

[Spookers]

Very interesting.

[Suzy Q]

"Don’t doubt me
My words could kill"
My favorite lines, no doubt. Words can kill. I really like this.

[Sweet Emotions]

In the line "Your nothing more" and "Your barking up the wrong tree", your should be you're. Sorry, that's one of my pet peeves. Other than that, this is good. Keep up the great writing!

[RedInk524]

Lol, interesting. I enjoy the feeling of burning chains lashing out from between the lines.

[jhed]

wow.. your words really could kill.. its like reciting some spell while reading this poem. I loved how the rhyme goes out and about..
keep it up!

[Celeste21]

If a man is worth fighting for, he won't stand back and watch you fight. He will end every insecurity. Dispel any negative notion in your minds eye. Assuring you he is on your side, and his actions will follow suit. take care, ali

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Them there sound like fighting words Ali, I am very happy I am not the one your pen is aiming at. But this is a very direct and emotive write. You have done very well with your pen. Who ever she may be, I hope she can write as well as you do. xo (just a little humor needed)

[∂αʌ<..]

Heartfelt rhyme
Kills slowly inside
Rip you to shreds
While your unconscious in bed
My words can be daggers
Triggered at will
Don’t doubt me
My words could kill

amazing!

[joshua deathdealer]

I love it. A very easy on the eyes way off telling someone to kick rocks!!