Beautifully Alive

Beautifully Alive

A Poem by Alicia Hirshey

"Dreams caress the inner most stretches of our brains, how we capture the image for paper is our own gift. That is who we are, the true dreamers."-Me

~*~

Expressionless faces
Have come and gone

With ages
Towers are crumbling
Falling short of me
~*~
Love is fading
Light is glistening
Life is beckoning to me
~*~
Harmful words
They slash like knifes
I must hold strong
I can't lose this fight
~*~
Home was lost
Everything I've known
Taken from me
Long ago
~*~
Love is fading
Light is glistening
Life is beckoning to me
~*~
Waiting alone
For him to take you home
Will you have faith?
Or just run away?
~*~
Run to his arms
Happy yet sad
Given up everything
To have it back
~*~
Love is fading
Light is glistening
Life is beckoning to me

© 2011 Alicia Hirshey


Author's Note

Alicia Hirshey
I have reinvented myself, with a little time away, and a few changes here and there. I have finally found touch with who I am. Thank you for standing by me as I almost gave up everything. I love you all so much.

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This is a truly beautiful piece. I loved it. Well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I gotta say, this was a beautiful piece. The third and fourth stanzas definitely reach out and resonate with ideas and stories in my head as well, so that helps make this even that much more memorable of a piece. Keep up the good work, :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is beautifully simple and well-written. The third stanza is undoubtedly creative. It can be a great song.

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice write ali!
long live the woven dreamers!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this Ali, and I'm so glad that you're okay, aand I love you tooo (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautiful piece of perserverance and triumph! Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


"Harmful words. They slash like knifes I must hold strong I can't lose this fight."
I love an can relate to this part so much! Stay strong

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is your best poem that I've ever read. I can see the new you emerging. I love you too.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really feel the freedom found here within your words.. I really love it..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


i think this is a beautifully exquisite poem which all the right words in it!

Love is fading
Light is glistening
Life is beckoning to me

love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 22, 2011
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Alicia Hirshey
Alicia Hirshey

Hartford City, IN



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