where ever the hearts may linger

just something i wrote

Tell me...
Do the angels treat you right?
do they bring you news of the world..
news of us...wasting time... being alive.
of us fooling around.... with endless hopes


Do you from above see the night?
how it spreads the darkened shade...
slowly expanding to swallow the lights,
and rest silently waiting for us to fade...


Do you see the shinning sun,
above the sky casting rays?
do you feel the gentle touches?
and the kind warmth can you embrace?


Or is your soul too dead to feel...
is your grave too dark and cold...
scared we are to face what's real
for death is a mistry that's never been told.

Author's Note

again... one of my crazy thoughts.

Reviews

[Melon Race]

Very nicely written, and quite an interesting subject. It reminds me of those satellite photos that are taken at night time and you see the illuminated cities on the map. Wonderful. My favourite part, however, was the title. It's a phrase that can easily be turned into a question, and the fact that you didn't was awesome, because the point isn't about what happens to us when we die, but obviously how we lead our own lives and cope with the loss of a loved one.

Brilliant.

[Salar Majak]

:D thanks a lot for your kind words!
i really am gratful,
and about the title, i just thought of it, i didn't even know if it was even suitable :P,
you made me sure it is,thank you for that :D

[Melon Race]

You're so very welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. I'm 1/2 Ojibwa. I remember walking into a hospital room. My grandmother had passed to the next place. I knew her spirit was gone. The body is just a suitcase for us. Go to a graveyard. No feel of life is there. I hope there are better places after we died? Very good question brought to life in the poem. I tell people. Enjoy life. We don't know where the next journey may take us. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Salar Majak]

:),
i'm glad you like it , and i agree we must enjoy life and what it brings because it is a gift, thanks a lot for reading!

[Annabelle Lee]

shining
mystery

Other than that this poem was exceptional! WOW!!!! and it flowed so well,BRAVO!

[Salar Majak]

XD thanks sooooo much@!!!!!!!!

[DIVYA]

If we can feel something, then there's still hope for us. I think it's upto us to save our souls from dying.

A great thought penned here Aurora. Thanks for sharing it.

[Salar Majak]

thanks a lot i'm glad you like it

[Lozzie]

Wow this is soo deep!!! I often wander what happens to the souls of people who pass on... i don't beleive it is the end but where they go is a mistery to me... i surely would love to find out... not now though :P I've too many thing to do :D

Again well done :) Though i don't always review from lack of ways of explaining my thoughts... i do read all of your poetry and i love it all :D Well done!!!

[Salar Majak]

thank you so much :), your words humble me :), and i agree with you, we would want to find out where they go

[larryb]

Very good write the words flow nicely :)

[Salar Majak]

thank you!!

[Craig2591]

Very nice! Feels like it could be lyrics to a song. That was my first thought as I read it.

[Salar Majak]

XD thanks a lot! maybe it will, who knows ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

Good ending. Nice job

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[Chidoriflower]

There is some kind of ancient beauty in this, I can't exactly pinpoint. It is so very mystical, like an angel looking over earth. :D

[Salar Majak]

wow your words make me blush like a tomatoo, thanks! i'm glad you like it

[Chidoriflower]

you're very welcome!

[Nick.B]

A very sensitive poem from a great poet...love it

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[Cara]

amazing write sis ^_^

[Salar Majak]

thanks sis!