My Dreams Got Crushed More Than I Did

My Dreams Got Crushed More Than I Did

A Book by Becky Lawrence
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Temporary title. A sixteen year old's (Aubrey) point of view. It starts out a little slow, explaining how she got into freestyle MX. Then it gets to the good part, technically the bad part...

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© 2011 Becky Lawrence


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And there we go, done. I liked this a lot, i like who most of the things you write about are sort of fantasies, things that are normally unatinable.
Your dialogue is extremly witty and well written, as well as your descriptions.
The only problem i had was with the tense you was using, made me confused sometimes, but i do it as well, so i ain't going to go on about it.
Sorry i did not get round to this sooner, you are really good, keep it up:)

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I've been writing since seventh grade. It started as a hobby and became an addiction. I have become an insomniac because of the thoughts and ideas going on in my head. I will read most read request.. more..

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