Falling Is said to be like Flying.

Falling is said to be like flying,

The wind in your face and sky above,

The birds around you and the ground below,

The sun shinning bright and the rivers still flow,

Falling is said to be like flying.

Falling is said to be like flying,

Their is that one second of freedom,

And one that one moment where you just live,

The sensation of joy,

and the sensation of fear,

Falling is said to Be like flying.

The only thing that i think,

that separates the two,

Is that one must end with a violent crash,

and the other will keep in a dash. 

So when people say Falling is like flying,

it is only up to you,

To determine if it is true.

Reviews

[BrynnaW.]

Very true. Falling is, in a way, like flying. Strange... I liked this. Made me think a little more. Good job! Keep on writing!

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I like the end verse very much; choosing for oneself if falling and flying are the same. Also flying can end in a crash- a crash landing, and falling can end with love- falling in love, or landing- landing on your feet. So thought provoking.

[Daytonight]

Very well done! I like the use of the repetition to stress your meaning. The rhyme and flow is really good too! Keep up the great work!

[Dremmestar]

Nice soothing poem...i like it!!!

[TheElfPrincess]

A great poem, easy to read and good flow and format. Kept me reading until the end so well done.

[McKinleyA]

There's a great, powerful message to this. And like Hunter said, it had awesome flow!

[Hunter C. Brown]

i like the poem, very good write!!! plus there is a lot of flow to it, i really enjoyed it. keep on writing!!!!

[ClaireBear]

it can be like flying, but not too much