Crimson.

My second attempt at a poem, slightly darker.

My soul,
It carries a burden,
Of words unspoken.

Dripping blood.
About to burst,
I hope for the worst.

Just make it end.
Cut it out,
Take the shortest route.

Crimson thoughts pour out my soul.
Then the pain ends,
I'm at my fin.

Author's Note

No i do not plan on committing suicide.

Reviews

[Just Brooke]

This is really deep and dark with very elaborate and descriptive imagery. It's very unique and powerful. I especially like the last stanza, very beautiful. You are very gifted.

[GP]

I really like dark poetry and this one is realllllyyyy dark lol! It's good!

[Kala Benfield]

I love this, its beautiful

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Of this i am glad to hear! ( regarding your note)
I enjoy all types of poetry, dark, light, you know..sonnets ect.
This is very good. Dark poetry has its place and most poets have written
darkness. I feel as if the person has a terrible secret so hard to bear she wishes for a final ending. Nice writing.

Chloe