Its the start of a whole new world

Its the start of a whole new world my friend

love grows on trees 

and hate doesn't exist

perfection doesn't matter

and money has no value

 

We are turning the world upside down

mixing it up

but not taking anything out

and by the time we are done 

people will be stading on the sky 

looking up at the ground saying

its the start of a whole new world my friend

love grows on trees 

and hate doesn't exist

perfection doesn't matter

and money has no value

Reviews

[Jacques]

sarah your poem is brilliantly written and is beautiful in its own right but i dont know why everyone is knitpicking saying this is a plastic world because its not plastic if everyone tried better and in my opinion, view and perspective theres nothing to say about this poem negatively . keep it up . love your poems . thanks for you reccomendation

[amdc101]

This is a great dream. Assuming from your profile, it will take people like ou to make the world this way. Great write, I enjoyed it.

[Sujash I. Purna]

I have never seen a poet so optimistic! This is a fake plastic world you try to imagine Sarah! Good try...but I am chortling secretly...how naive you are! It should have been hate grows everywhere...love is a dream...pathetic...not your poetry but this world...

Think things through.
Looking forward to some sad stuff!

[.quan.011.]

This a beautifully written poem, Sarah. I wish the world was like this, but we have a lot of problems with this world. Not just with leaders, but with common people . Great write. Thanks for sharing this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Year ago. A China man stop a tank. For a moment the whole world was at peace. He saved many people. For your dream to come true. Will need a whole world demanding leaders to talk and fix problems without guns and violence. I like the logic of your poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote