Such a Scene

Such a Scene

A Poem by Bridger Hall

Such an emo

I looked past everything you were
I saw the sun in your black eyes
I wished away my problems riding in your car
I talked a world of future plans
I was sure you´d be a part
You didn´t take time stripping of your clothes
I never had that much in mind
I was looking desperately for love
And when i wanted things to work
I kept you locked to keep you around
I was alone inside your arms
And I shot down everything I had planned
For that
So what if i sing the whole world to sleep
And what if im looking for someone else at my show
I sang for you
And you were only there for the attention
Put on your clothes
And pretend you never knew me
The one that shreds his throat for you
Is done

© 2012 Bridger Hall

Author's Note

Bridger Hall
Never fall for a hot girl with a nose ring after a show. She doesn´t mean well.

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Love sucks. Nice write :) really enjoyed it

Posted 12 Years Ago

Cool :) No, not emo, but your right, nose ring after a show, and looks good... Oh well, you got a poem out of it; right?

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is a great poem! :D
Grammar wise, second stanza, 3rd line needs a capitol i. same for 3rd stanza first line. But in itself, I really enjoyed it! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

I really liked this :) very well written

Posted 12 Years Ago

but anyway i really like this poem it is so easy to relate to and very honest :) wonderful write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

we are all looking for love weather we realize it or not. Some of us give up what means most to us, just for a chance to have that love, but in the end if you find it or not, part of your heart will be broken for the things you lost, for the things you gave up..If the ones we love cant accept us for who we are and what we love then we just have to ask ourselves if they ever really loved us in the first place? :/ lust and love are 2 different things..

Posted 12 Years Ago

Hah Nice poem. Really thought out. And not every pretty Girl is like that. You just have to pick out the Fakes and the realones. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

I can totally relate to this poem

Posted 12 Years Ago

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8 Reviews
Added on February 27, 2012
Last Updated on February 27, 2012
Tags: love, loss, heartbreak, pain, sadness


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