I Am Sorry.

I Am Sorry.

A Poem by Skai Rain
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I really, really hate poetry but have some feelings.

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I am sorry I'm not perfect.

I am sorry I'm not worth it.


You can call me weak.

Forever I will be meek.


I am sorry you have such a flawed view of what is strong.

And I am sorry that you view my opinion as wrong.


I am sorry that you don't love me,

But you are still my brother.

I will always love you.



Good luck. 

© 2014 Skai Rain


Author's Note

Skai Rain
This is about a kid that got bullied a lot when we were in school. I took him under my wing and got everyone to leave him alone, we became so close we were practically siblings. Then he got a girlfriend and did not need my company anymore. I guess I was a good sister.

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Great writing, speaks LOUDLY, yet after reading your notes, sad he left you hanging after you helped him so much. Then again LOVE can consume us, so lets pray he's happy. Great piece, thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


"I am sorry that you don't love me,
But you are still my brother.
I will always love you"... this is true love... giving everything but expecting nothing in return..
A really good write...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Loved your poem. I read your author's note too and I'm sorry to hear how it turned out for you but you are a big person for helping him.

Posted 4 Years Ago


well you gave him what he needed to be somebody,he wont forget you

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow that really hit home for me. I unfortunately can relate to those circumstances of getting picked on by an entire school. I'm really glad he had someone to guide him through. I know you don't like poetry but you did a great job at evoking emotion from your readers

Posted 4 Years Ago


Skai Rain

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I am very proud of you For the way you took a friend under your wings and showed an act of kindness. Blessings on you and all you do.,

Posted 4 Years Ago


Skai Rain

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Aww, this is so sad, but this poem truly shows how amazing you are, with such a lovely and beautiful heart, you had to let him go as a mother let's her children walk alone in their time to mature. However, I am sorry to hear such thing happened to you. This poem is well written, with lines that contains a lot of emotion and meaning...nicely done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Skai Rain

4 Years Ago

Aw, thank you so much! I wouldn't say I am anywhere near amazing but I am happy to accept the compli.. read more
The Black Warrior

4 Years Ago

You are very welcome! :D
I can tell you were a good friend to him you should be proud that you helped him through it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Skai Rain

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Jamie

4 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Sounds like a good sister to me and if not a sister, a very good person and friend. I loved this piece and your Author's Note brought it all home. He won't ever forget what you did for him...trust me on that.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Skai Rain

4 Years Ago

Thank you, that means a lot. And thank you for reviewing.
short yet very emotional. feel bad that he left you. very well written!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Skai Rain

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading

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