No Longer(version2)

No Longer(version2)

A Poem by Owl City
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someone saying no longer will they take the other persons crap.

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                  I shed a tear. 
  But you no longer care.  
  I cry for help but you no longer help.  
  I cry alone and die inside but you no longer care.   
  Now I learn that you will never care for me, for you hate me and no longer love me.  
   So I die and rest in peace but you no longer love for me or care for me, but if only you would I would rise from the dead and be loved again, and not some outcast to you. I could be loved again and no longer feel so scared and alone but you will no longer will you love me. So now i cry and die inside, cry for help, and die alone but you no longer help or care. I think I'm starting to get the hint that you would never love me again...  

                  

 

© 2009 Owl City


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Owl City
hope u like it.

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I love it!!! My friend is going thorugh that and I feel so bad 4 HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was beautiful!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted 12 Years Ago


That was really good, and deep. I like how parts from the begining repeted in the end, when I need for that person was no longer there. Although I'm sorry if you had to go through anything like that. the Poem was good, great succsess. I loved the signature at the end, expetially since I have the same name. :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


So hmmm... who could she be talking to? Could be someone who broke her heart but could it also be her own negative attitude maybe? Or a parental figure who refuses to build her up?
Tell me... what does the poet say?
Nice work...

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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