Lost In A Kiss

When you kiss me...

There are sparks

In the flames of my desire

Igniting, fireworks on the fourth of July.

 

Strobe light flashes

Blinded by the romance of it all

Head over heels in eternity

Filling my heart with passion.

 

Intoxicated sweet poison

Lingering sensuality on my lips

Falling ever so slowly, gracefully

Within all of your climaxes.

 

Caught in the embrace

Irresistable force of love

Felt only in the erotic

Dirty dancing of the tongue.

 

I have never felt more alive

In the agony and ectasy

As I lose all control over me

The heavy pounding drums of my heart.

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

There are no words I can offer to explain how lovely this is and yet so well composed. I liked it for its flow and spotless assemblage of words.

[Ruth]

You verse love so well...its realistic to remember its agony as well as the beauty, divinely written love xoxo

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Such a lovely write, and so wonderful. I enjoyed this.

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Oooh so lovely and sensual poem! Well done sweetie! =)

[∂αʌ<..]

so so sensual...really wow! and i agree with Valentino, whats better than a kiss!?
you are indeed the best! your words are dancing...alive!
wow!

[Antonio Valentino]

what is better then a kiss..

its nature's butterfly, shared by two

you're the best!
xx :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

NOW "this" is a KISS!... This poem is a very intoxicating embrace of- "Dirty dancing of the tongue."... Wow!...Who knew?!! LOVED IT!! :)

[LilMissWriter17]

Such beautiful detail and words :) I love it :) Very romantic

[paradise]

Awwhe its so romantic and detailed

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Very romantic...so beautiful....