Out Of This World

Another written for class bit.

Out of this world and into another,

Walking on thin layers of glass

To escape the vast chaos of reality

And be kissed with vast visionaries.

Something of impossibility,

But always possible if you can dream

Iridescent hues and monstrous globes

As far as the human mind can forsee.

Big bang theories, alien-like

Paintings of supernovas and galaxies

Spinning like pinwheels flying in the wind

Spitting and sprinkling glittered dust.

Masters of the vast universe

Lavish the sky with brilliance

Around an astronomical ball of flame

Tiny compared to where it stays.

My words could never capture

Nor could a painter the colorful lustre

Of death, reincarnation, and birth of anew

Something so out of this world.

Reviews

[Tarrna]

So very pure and beautiful. An amazing write

[Revery]

This is just a wonderful description, so much detail and depth to your words. Please continue to send me more rr for you work. lovely

[Dayran]

Where we are awed by the majesty and life of the universe, we realize first of all that it is us. Then we wrestle with it to bring it into comprehension so that it knows it is loved as much as we are. Nice!

[Asb]

a very fine write indeed :)
beautifully explained !!

[Amila Jay]

A great write:-)

[Raven Starhawk]

There is a way of bringing poetry to life. You seem to be able to do so with such splendor and delight. I love the lines. They have a very rich concept.

[MetBySunlight]

Such a beautiful write (:

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

Very good, loved the flow and word choice :)