STRAIGHT LOVE

pure white means straight love

It is a dark night

Glittering snows I see fly

Winter is pure white

Author's Note

is it okay?

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

CAPOLAVARO,
"STRAIGHT LOVE"
To place a thought process within this format is incredible. This poem on love is just as the image you've chosen, black and white. This makes it's voice heard with straightforward simplicity.
As the stars shine against the black night you've expressed the pure strong statement:
"Winter is PURE WHITE. (Pure White means straight love) The author's note is perfect!
Blessings,
Kathy

[emipoemi]

It takes talent to write a profound haiku that not only flows with natural and musical fluidity, but also rhymes. Well done!

[Najam Us Saher]

I wonder how people can write such thoughtful and meaningful haikus. I liked it.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Najam. I believe it is all about the difference we have and the interactions we have with our inner thoughts. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes exactly.....you're welcome ☺

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yup a nice haiku which is able to evoke the image within it.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. :)

[Poeticme]

Do your friends below what commented​ on this piece, even know what they are reading, they sound very smart when they say such terrible things about something they know nothing about,.....Once again this was a powerful and beautiful HIAkU.

Poeticme

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. How sweet of you to say that.

[Poeticme]

Is it ok??, Its beautiful sweetie, a very wonderful write.....I love Hiakus!!, I have several myself....Very beautiful imagery, you captured it totally

Poeticme

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much Poeticme. I totally agree. Haiku is so lovely yet so hard. I had a hard time constructing this one as I need a lot of inspiration and life for it to sound surreal. Thank you.

[APOORVA]

cute small and captvating

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like the imagery here. Some things are truly appreciated only in the dark..
Nice wordplay. I liked it 😊👍

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊