BRING ME TO MY KNEES

A poem for HIM.

The dark crawls at the very edge

Days of turmoil, confusion, unrest,

'cause humanity is still at calm

'cause someone is still cutoff

Lucifer unlocked the chains of hope

Walkin' in a rain of fire

Pulling and pushing the soul buyer

'cause greatness is sometimes loosen

'cause weakness comes without sayin'

Humans are truly forbidden

Just has come from above

Thunder rolling out of love

Lions roaring out of sight

Here comes the glory

Here comes our light

He who knows nothin' but truth

Pulled and crushed my youth

Now, maturity comes in

Dodge the fire, dodge the sin

Let the spirit settle in

Bring me to my knees, I beg

Humble me down and bow my head

Hold my heart and hold my breath

Be my wine and be my bread

Be my wings and now spread

Oh! Lord so great with power

I call thee at this hour

Put an end on that tower

Let us not just sit and glower

But let us move with sweet love and not sour

Released the dove and know that I am dry

Pour the water that is so divine

Such a splendor with teary eyes

I now know

that for me to live, you died

Bring me to my knees

the song unleashed

the first time of joy

and the first bliss

It is bring me to my knees

Reviews

[Osé Dazo]

Woah, deep poem. I was having a hard time to fathom it, first but I love how the mystery crawls in your poetry. ^^, Love it! Keep writing!

[CAPOLAVORO]

As deep as your thoughts it could never be. How your mind works gives meaning and movement to my words. Thank you with great joy Ose.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[Osé Dazo]

Hehe... really? ^^, That's so nice of you, capolavoro! Thanks a million! I can see you have such a wonderful heart. ^^, God bless you, really! ^^,

[Hi]

"Oceans" by Hillsong is one I enjoy; am sure the Lord enjoyed this and I think it's good enough that others will appreciate it as poetry too. Thanks.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Truly, I respect your chosen song with ease and gladness that you are for the Lord Almighty. Your enjoyment will be his gladness as I offer Him this. Thank you so much.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[Mr confido]

i love your poems, words are not enough to express how i feel after reading this. in fact i can't elucidate my feelings.... nice poem, keep it up...

[CAPOLAVORO]

It is nice to hear that you love it Confido. I am so happy that the piece brought some good mixed feelings unto you. Thank you so much for reading.

[Mr confido]

you're welcome.. capolavoro

[barleygirl]

This is a very interesting poem about knowing or getting to know God. It starts out a little nebulous & not clearly a sacred type of message, but then your meaning becomes more & more clear as the poem goes on, until the last few stanzas are downright powerful & compelling. The title is powerful & your message ends on this powerful note . . . which to me, is the main crux of having a relationship with God, that is, to surrender, to allow His plan to guide our lives. Being on one's knees, to me, is the sign of our surrender. Letting go of control is hard for us humans *wink! wink!*

[CAPOLAVORO]

I do understand what you mean Barleygirl. :) It definitely is not easy but somehow there are some forces that urge us to try. Thank you so much for reading. :)

[Abraham George]

i liked the way to detailed the emotions . A good work. thanks for sharing.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you for reading my friend. :)

[wordman]

a beautiful praise poem,he loved it

[CAPOLAVORO]

I do hope too. Thank you for seeing the beauty in it wordman. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful journey in your words. The journey to know peace. Needed and good place to know. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[CAPOLAVORO]

Yours are also amazing Cayote. Thank you so much.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Najam Us Saher]

I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem. Truly a great work. Well done.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you for having a time to read. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Mr.Writer]

A powerful, beautiful and emotional poem Capolavoro!! Like you said in your note, it sings like a song, and I also can hear the beats playing gracefully!
Well done, keep it up :))

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you for hearing the music in it. :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :))

[Wajiha Nayeem]

beautifully written........

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. :)