DaDaLust

PROTEAN NotUnTitled: The Philosophical Cantos / Canto I / WaitHereEyeSolAtes Cantos (III) . . . Nota Bene: This book is my Inferno. [not about or inspired by the Dadaist movement]

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED - Do not reproduce without the author's permission--Links OK.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is more than art. This is pure fun. This is what covering your jean backed notebook is all about, it's like the inventor of the peace sign using the semaphore letters N and D for nuclear disarmament then inverting it and drawing a circle around it. Pure fun and it makes people scratch their heads because they are wondering what fun is. lol

[Latinadarkness27]

ABSOLUTELY GEORGEOUS.

[Mocreia]

I am dazed. It's visual before you even open it. I think I'd describe it as "a poem to be LOOKED at."

[C. Lee Rogers]

EYE LICKedict Th oE Et WU ZHEY PLOTDOVE work>>>>>

[Stevie Jean Reed]

What I like is it's words making a visual impact.... a sculpture-tooupscure :) and also by sifting through your brain picks out word sounds and meanings by way a pattern matching.anti poem..kewl

[Michael Bauer]

this has a good page feel. it's like the architecture of the street, like a mind being a street, and i can move in it. i can move in it and not feel lost, cause of the neon signs lighting up my intuition. when i was in williamsburg last there was this man in a hat selling me youghurt and he saw that i'm queer and shoved my change and me out the door. he was selling me queer'd milk, so i didn't care. i wouldn't change anything in this poem, and i'm glad there is poetry written like this. it kind of makes me feel happy to read it, just because it's so fresh.

[Scott Casale]

Chedderhead said it best "Deranged enlightenment."

Brilliant.

Some of the complex images, and verbosities best combined, and cracked atrocities here, make the searing mind.

I really liked that. Repetition of this reading will surely foment the lush depth of its understanding, like an aged cheese.

[Steven Silvey]

that made my head hurt

[Brett Campaigne]

i demand an audio reading

[Cheddarhead]

Thank you for bringing my attention to your work. Seriously. There is so much here to be discovered. Surrealist writing? Love it. Deranged Enlightenment. cool

[T. Barton James]

Thouroughly enjoyable!