DaDaLust

PROTEAN NotUnTitled: The Philosophical Cantos / Canto I / WaitHereEyeSolAtes Cantos (III) . . . Nota Bene: This book is my Inferno. [not about or inspired by the Dadaist movement]

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

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Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is more than art. This is pure fun. This is what covering your jean backed notebook is all about, it's like the inventor of the peace sign using the semaphore letters N and D for nuclear disarmament then inverting it and drawing a circle around it. Pure fun and it makes people scratch their heads because they are wondering what fun is. lol

[Nicole M. Isabella]

You are a true artist in every sense of the word! Not only have you mastered words in meaning but have used them in a truly original picturesque way. Kudos to you and your art!
With respect,
N*

[R. Kurtz]

When I started reading this, I instantly thought of Only Revolutions...you can probably guess why.

This is astonishing! Clever, is a sick understament and genius doesn't seem like enough, either.

It took a few line to get used to how things worked, but after that it flowed very well.

[Mike Firesmith]

Wow.

That
looks

as much
work
to
type
out
as
to
think
out!

[Steven Wyss]

Holy s**t! This must have required an awful lot of work to make all of the words and their variations meet as they do. You have much more patience than I, my friend. Poetry does not have to do much of anything but to give us some impresions and to make us feel. This poem makes me feel an awful lot of things, which is much more than I can say for some of the flowery traditional crap I have been forced to read in the past. I have not this skill, but I recognise it at being written by someone who displays a very high degree of sophistication. You may very well be the most talented person that I have encountered in this realm. Take care and God bless...

Steve

[eli mercuree rue]

did i just do some type of witchcraft reading that lol my brain hurts im going to sleep

[Althea Tremaine]

I am so confused... I can't even understand the format or how it's supposed to be read. All I can say is that it's most definately different. Kudos for that.

[Saber]

WOW! I can't even imagine how long it took you to construct this piece. Very artistic! You definitely color outside the lines. :)

[Michael William Fowler]

woah......im not even going to try and pretend i understand what the hell is going on above me.....im kinda scared now...i dont think im gonna sleep tonight.....thanks. it did keep me entertained it seems more like looking at a beautiful abstract painting then trying to read literature.

[C. Harter Amos]

Carol, you definitely get five stars for entertaining your audience. (And/or yourself?) Nothing boring here...I thought I could tackle this beasty, but I don't know if it is over my head or simply around the bend from where I am at the moment. I enjoyed it at any rate. Do you still call it "read" or "poem" when it gets this visual? - Mimi.

[Paul Corman Roberts]

Hi Carol, if you don't mind...can I ask how long it took you to construct this poem? It seems a hybrid of L-A-N-G-U-A-G-E and concrete...but somehow transcends both of those genres entirely.