LEBERATE

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Reviews

[JR]

I like the way you structured this, in a way. It certainly broke convention, and that's what poetry is supposed to do. The message was great, that before one can fully understand something well enough to rebel against it, one must first become a part of it. Like me and Christianity, but that's another story.

In a way, the poem is confusing in the layout. I also don't understand the use of "Leberate" instead of "liberate," and I'm not sure that you even needed that word in there. It's a good, clear message, but I'm not sure that the layout enhances it; it may just confuse the issue.

[Cory Clark]

i loved it it goes against everything that modern poetry is and with everything that it should be. wish i'd have thought of it first. it's nice to see people that have mind of their own around. instead of wanna be's who have nothing reall to say.

[Sarah Graves]

A great concept. What I get from it is that we must look into ourselves and question our core beliefs to make an argument agaisnt it. To understand why someone rebels we must understand ourselves first, something needed for liberation. Amazing style and content you convey!

[Myk Malice]

awesome ---I love it it says so much with so little and that's why advertising works. but the messages are in the wrong hands..

[Richard McLin]

Very original, and that is the whole point behind experimental and poetry. Great job man.

[Kevin Connolly]

This is brilliant, Carol. It LOOKS brilliant... such an original style.
You have to be it before you can rebel against it...
So many people rebel against people just like them, because they refuse to accept what sort of person they really are.
Excellent.

[Laura Hietala]

This is AWESOME!
I love your form, not to mention the way you make such a powerful statement in so few words.

[Bryan L]

This
is
awesome.

Iwanttohangitonmywall.

[Gordon Greene]

Brilliant
oBSERVATIONALISM.
wELL DISPLAYED
eMOTIONALISM. Both
l-UCID &
l-YRICAL.

Good job!

[Closed Closed]

Such a true and powerful statement. I love the way you presented it. Very unique. I've only seen one or two other poems presented in this manner on other sites and I liked them as well. I don't know if this experimentation for you, but it is definitely something to run with.