LEBERATE

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Reviews

[JR]

I like the way you structured this, in a way. It certainly broke convention, and that's what poetry is supposed to do. The message was great, that before one can fully understand something well enough to rebel against it, one must first become a part of it. Like me and Christianity, but that's another story.

In a way, the poem is confusing in the layout. I also don't understand the use of "Leberate" instead of "liberate," and I'm not sure that you even needed that word in there. It's a good, clear message, but I'm not sure that the layout enhances it; it may just confuse the issue.

[Closed Closed]

Such a true and powerful statement. I love the way you presented it. Very unique. I've only seen one or two other poems presented in this manner on other sites and I liked them as well. I don't know if this experimentation for you, but it is definitely something to run with.

[Ennovy]

This is a very true statement in verse. You have an very vivid imagery....and the beat is totally awesome, it made the read balance and flow.
Write on!...............novy

[Brett Campaigne]

Offen those who i'm Gainst i am For

Gainst your skin, Against rather, to your resolute

[Barry Simiana]

i don't know poerty, but i know strong comments that are right. this is one of them. i want to know about the SoB thing as well, coz if it's intentional, it's a clever finger at someone. if unintentional, then how funny is it how the mind works.
thanks

[Abigail Romans]

this is all so neat.

so interestingly.....i can't find words.

yes, no words for your words.

all i know is: it is brilliant.

[Jenni Meredith]

So true!

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are you calling me a Lil SOB on the upperleft corner ?