that was a very good start; and I'm interested as to see what else you do with it. I really enjoyed the overall feel, it just made me think something along the lines of *I can tell you what the final goal is but I won't tell you how to get there; you have to make it mean enough to figure out on your own* so yea, I enjoyed this alot, also I'm desperatly new here (lol) how do you add things to your favorites??
~jess
Oh, I adore Dante' And where is that f*****g Virgil anyway? Good help is just so hard to find these days! It was all a matter of the blind leading the blind anyway.And neither could forget what they saw.
Man who ruins mondays I think I met him once. He's not cool. Again I love reading your poems they have a philosophy bent that is just interesting for me. I love the Dante quote got to read that one again. Always send me whatever you got.
And then went down to the ship, Set keel to breakers, forth on the godly sea, and . . . Ezra Pound (TCOEP).
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