Stimmung

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Reviews

[Diánna Martin (b..]

I LOVED this.
This is so sad...so brilliant. I do believe that this is my favorite piece of your yet.

Eyeam all alone...
Starving eating my very owned thoughts

You make a reader feel, my dear. And from feeling comes empathy.
The brilliant construction of the deconstruction never ceases to amaze me.

[Dima]

The way you word things is amazing. Your work really makes me think, to the point it hurts at some points. Thanks for the great read, very mentally stimulating. I can't wait to read more!

[Flo]

I loved the toying with words. Interesting format, too, with the staggered lines . . . I believe Allen Ginsberg at times did something similar.

I tried to decode the meaning of the capitalized letters and the the punctuation, but I've determined that the meaning here is individually determined, to a certain degree, and this is a sort of postmodern dadaist prose. I don't know if this is your style, since I haven't read much else from you yet, but I do like this.

Reminds me of a dada experimental story of my own: "Animal Husbandry". It's on my profile. You should check it out if you get a chance.

[Blank]

Very, very original. I love your style, it makes me think. I liked the ending especially.

[Ryan Jaimz Knight]

Uhm, could you maybe explain your style to me, because I have honestly never seen poetry written like this before. I think this might be my first exposure to experimental prose!
BJH

[Anna Peckinpah]

excellent use of switching "eye" and "I"; gives perception into how we as humans depend so much on how we see and view things to form our opinions and ultimately mold our destiny, which in this case, turns out to be tragic for someone else chose to look at another with prejudice...

least thats what spoke to me through this writing...WONDERFUL JOB!!!

[Arc]

Experimental poetry is always the most fascinating. I have long been awaiting a revolution in literature that will do for our Art what Picasso, Geiger and DaVinci did for "painting". This may very well be the beginning of it.Rock on.PunxRool

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very creatively constructed. i applaud you for origniality.

[Michey Sharp]

I read your poetry and this one is my favorite...something in the words or nonwords or maybe just the way you arranged it really spoke to me...wonderful

[Dreamer]

i loved this... the visual arrangement sets off the tone and really makes you think about every word. very moving...

[Verena]

i liked how your arrangement of words showed your emotions. the writingstyle made the poem so strong! i loved it!