Rain

It was raining earlier so I thought I would write about it.

Drip Drip Drip of a rain drop
Plop Plop Plop on my face
Puddles everywhere
On the cobble stone

Squish Squish Squish as I walk
Splash Splash Splash on my legs
Water coating everything
Purging my heart

I breathe out just to see steam
Come from my chapped lips
Feel God's tear drops
On my skin

Author's Note

Critique if you like :)

Reviews

[Jab]

i liked it alot

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[quarintine_deathangel]

A sad drop off there but really good write, especially with the onamotapeias ;)

[Heromen Selena]

Oh I'll see if I can make it longer. Thank you for your thoughts :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Rain is a blessing and a pain in the butt. I like the use of words and the interesting ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I love your work.

[just is]

not good at Critique, but enjoyed this piece.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your thoughts

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Always had a thing for the rain. Enjoyed this creative write. Nicely done.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)