Had & Sappy

Had & Sappy

A Poem by words of rooted design
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Psalm 27:14

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                                                                                 insipid are words                                                                                                                whereas all virtue was resigned
                                                                                      not a hasty lust 
                                   no unearned miracles, but a slighted design
                                bridging the plague between 
                                                                                     wine 
                                                                                              and 
                                                                                                     whine  
                          entertaining oneself with the ideas of life in 1595
                                                                                                               inscription of love
                                                                                                               a romantically bloody crime
                                                                                                               tapering physical distance                                                                                                                         where heavenly souls realign
                                                                                                               despite Shakespeare's absense
                                                                                                               this amores as equally sublime
                                    


© 2013 words of rooted design


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Realign, sublime...just beautiful really.
I thought you had some really great key points in this one. It really made me think about life whilst I also thought about how wonderfully written this is.
So much meaning...presented in a gorgeous fashion, really...I just love it.
As for your authors note, even though you said you've failed miserably in one specific part, you're still a step ahead because not only are you aware that you've failed, you also have the pieces to put together the puzzling solution:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Just beautiful emotions in adorable mood. Wonderful creation.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This reads... just like a book... packed with meaning and orchestrated in a relatively rapid amount of words to the reader... packs a punch... I must say...

Posted 10 Years Ago


GO HEARTS AND FEELINGS!! This is awesome work. Keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


long live the heart , and the words it expresses

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I absolutely adored this. You're words flow as a river on a sweet summer day. The lust of which you speak is utterly true. I approve!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You most certainly used words to your advantage. My father tells me that poetry is a good practice in using as little words as you can to tell a big story or paint a big picture. You obviously got some good practice out of this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well done. This one got me thinking.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Again, I am impressed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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