Her red dress

I needed to write a poem about a woman in a red dress who stole my hearts many moons ago.

                          Her red dress

Lady elegance with hair of auburn brown. She waited by her window.  She wished on the first star and the moon. To feel needed and wanted. She is lady sad and lonely. She had spent too much time alone in the house.

Once she was lady love. She wanted to be wild and wanted to dance, drink and sing. Sweet kisses of regret had become kisses missed and wished for in the dust of the closing night.

Deny kisses and long embraces are remembered by a careless man. He remembered his love dancing in her red dress. Her shoulders bare and her long legs barely hidden by the soft material of her red dress. He called her and he told her.

My sweet love, put on your red shoes and your red dress. Tonight we drink, dance and find some laughter. I want you ready to celebrate the night. You are my salvation and joy. I love and die in your eyes of joy or sadness. Tonight we will dance and find the places we forgot. We will leave behind the useless places and life.

Lady sweet and forgiving. She allowed her tears to fall. She wanted to feel needed and alive. Her prayers were answered. She found her red dress and held her red shoes. She whispered quietly.  Thank you kind Gods of the night and love for allowing me to be content.

                               Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

A new poem. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautifully penned and so much Emotion and love and romance.


Thank you for this lovely piece
and thank you for your kind reviews and comments
you on my page.

Lady elegance with hair of auburn brown. She waited by her window. She wished on the first star and the moon. To feel needed and wanted. She is lady sad and lonely. She had spent too much time alone in the house.


you always paint such beautiful Romance
my poet friend.

Blessings. Kindred poet

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kindred poet. I appreciate your comment and kind words..

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It's a pleasure my Poet friend. You're very welcome. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Sophy Freebirds]

Two lost souls find each other.. heal each other and love each other.... sweet and romantic write... ;)
Inspite of a li'l grammatical error..Nice work. ;)

~Sophy

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sophy. I appreciate the help and the comment.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh wow that is such a tender piece of romantic writing… every woman wants to feel needed and a real man will make her feel that way.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Josh Dollar]

Magical... Very well written. I can see it all. Great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Josh for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Gurleen Saluja]

Lovely write.. This is what I have always admired.. Loved it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Gurleen. I appreciate the comment.

[Gurleen Saluja]

You are welcome sir :)