Angela

We can fall so low and deep. Need someone to pull us up to see daylight.

            Angela

 
Her beauty has lessen with time.
The circle of darkness surround her beautiful blue eyes.
Lack of sleep and proper diet.
Left her beaten, betrayed and dreams limited to daily survival.
In her 21 years of life.


Her blue eyes brought me to her.
Her long legs that went on for miles.
Were still temptation for the soul wanting too little now.

 
Her fearless eyes turn soft as she tremble in the face of tenderness.
I tell her please stay with me. We will have no secrets.

 
I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you.

 
We have nothing to lose.
All we have is painful and harsh desires that brought us together.

 
Sweet Angela looks into my eyes.
Searching.


She tells me I'm dirty with sin.
I have abandon all who have try to love me.
I don't deserve you.
Her hand holding my hand so tightly.

 
I whisper my fallen Angel.
There are few saints anyway.
I will take you places you have never been.
We will walk on long beaches.
Drink wine and talk till the sun falls into the sea.
I will hold you like you were my first love.

 
When the dusk come.
We eat and talk.
Fall on my soft bed.
I will find your secret softness.

 
I will whisper a liar pray.
Tell you how beautiful and wonderful you are.
 I will explored you with delight and discover all your  hidden secrets.

 
I look into  her blue eyes as her slender body move over my flesh.
 A small tear appear.
She whisper I will leave before the morning light.

 
I smile and caress her beautiful face.
Whisper we have lost nothing.
I just wanted to see your smile and hear your voice.

 
I will be here when you need me.
Angela kisses me and lays her head into my chest.


                 Coyote
                                      

Author's Note

When we fall down so low. Someone must pull us back and show us the way to peace and happiness again.
Coyote

Reviews

[Theresa]

Sometimes in life you fall and sometimes you are just lucky enough to have that special someone who helps you along. I loved the lines:
"I have been living on borrow kisses, loan embraces and leased love.
I whisper I have been waiting for you."
Beautifully written. Loved it.

[Marie Anzalone]

and I think back to all the times in my life I felt so ugly, and wished someone would lie to me and tell me I'm still beautiful. A very wise philosopher said, "our purpose on this earth is to love and be loved, and this includes the moments we are unlovable". This is powerful and true, Coyote, and brought tears to my eyes, to see your Angel's inner beauty through your own caring eyes.

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is so beautiful, I love it

[Allison]

This is great! Angela is like your other half. It's so goos to know that you can find people like this.

[TaiPie]

To start things off, this is a gorgeous poem. I love how the woman is described in the begninning, making her seem fradgile and tired even at the age of 21. The line "She tells me I'm dirty with sin." really jumped out at me, it is just so beautifully crafted like the entire poem! I just adore this poem, it's so emotional and heart wrenching. But, in a good way!

[Broken.buddy]

I really like the way you have structured the poem and the subtle warm feeling throughout.I could feel the want of what was coming in the end and the end delivers it beautifully.Splendid Job.This will go into my favourites.

[Lucy Joan]

Agree, there will always be a special someone to hold us back or encourage us through anything. No matter what happens, their care and love will last longer than the pain. Great poem.

[jeff hackworth]

very wise words

[LeeLee Ryder]

Beautifully done, CP ... I love the soft, tender flow of heartache that Angela faces but in the end, there's someone who will always be there for her spiritually & emotionally. Loved the subtle imagery throughout...
LLR

[Bear]

So true... and so kind of those who reach out of pull us lost souls back to the surface when we're almost out of breath and then nudge us towards a sunnier path in hopes the exploration will give new meaning to our life.

Fine Write, sorry it took so long for me to read!! Thanks for sharing it with me.
Sallie Bear

[A.Lee]

Wow, this is great. I can empathize... Definitely one of my favorites so far. Its very easy to relate with and I love the structure as well. I think I feel like her a lot..