Loneliness

Alone, singing moody songs
These four walls are a prison for my wrongs
This silence pierces my ears, leaving my deaf from those who betrayed me
They say loneliness won't last, but what will make the time past?
My heart aches from holding on too tight,
But I keep fighting with all my might.
The hollowness eats my soul, why is it so hard to let go?
I lay all my sins out in a row, harming myself with my mind,
Leaving permanent scars that won't ever fade away.

Author's Note

I'm new at writing, so any and all criticism will help out a lot

Reviews

[Miss Em]

a good piece :) keep up the nice work

[Mari K]

Isnt a bad piece actually. It's a bit wordy for the flow. Think maybe
"These Four walls, a prison for all my wrongs"
" this piercing silence leaves me deaf to those who betray me
For a new writer its good though. Keep working at it.