My Constant

My Constant

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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This is an ancient truth held by the hand of time and cannot be concealed

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You are My Constant, touching my skies

and surrounding me with the pleasure

of your existence.

This is an ancient truth

held by the hand of time

and cannot be concealed

or brought down,

futile is resistance.


I will never exhibit thorns

in between my words

or to your feelings

when walking alone

on the shores of my sea.

You are My Constant,

sailing always in the back of my mind,

a ship flying your colors

to the port of me.


You are My Constant.

The one I can never forget.

Without words you have spoken

to my heart

all these years.

You are my sun,

the light of all my hope.

My Constant,

the one I hold inside my heart,

most dear.

© 2013 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist: Joseph Edward Southall

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"There is no fear in Love for perfect Love casts out fear because fear involves torment." 1st John Holy Bible

We come to Love because Love comes to us...in our minds...our hearts...our consciences. Wonderful thoughts here well presented. Bless.



Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Fabian :)



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Oh, I agree with Dr Wood. I think this would be wonderful put to music. You have a beautiful heart, Neva. It shines through all you write. I love this and saving as a favorite.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Que Sera Sera :)
normally I am not a big fan of romance poems but this is put together very well,.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lucien :)
Neva, this is a very beautiful and calming poem. I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Becky :)
must be set to music...simply MUST

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Dr. Wood :)
It's just so mellow and beautiful. It's so fluid and every word fits and functions wonderfully. I never give full marks, but this is ridiculously close to perfection :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lewis :)
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another well crafted work of high beauty, neva.
it is an ageless theme, with ageless truth, and you have done it considerable justice.

i enjoy the fruits of your poetic skill.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Anonymous :)
Beautiful...!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you D. :)
You are the one thing that never changes...even through trial and tribulation I will not speak harsh words, but I will love you, My heavenly Father, with all my heart. This is what your words meant to me...beautiful Neva.:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Night :)
Extremely stunning and filled with deep affection. With your words you paint the essence of undying love, to be someone's constant, pure and undenying, complete and satisfying, eternal. Very beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend ;) X
This is smooth, melodic, and so silky soft in flow and rhythm.
And the content speaks of a perfect love presented, as total and complete.
Beautifully written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

11 Years Ago

Thank you Michael :)
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

You're welcome!

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Added on January 15, 2013
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