A Glorious Mist Will Come

A Glorious Mist Will Come

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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For my friend J.M.F. (Bear)

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You ask about this barren desert that you find me walking in

Where the strings of my heart
Are drawn so tight
That I cannot breathe or seem
To part

You wonder if there is more to life than these cracks I see
Or the dust flowing through my hands
And what can be done
With this need I find I have
To run

Yes, sometimes I wonder if there are hills that glow with light
Where I know that I can still stand and sing
About my endless hope
And the joy I know that life
Can bring

Do not worry yourself about the place you find me in
Though I know it sings aloud to you
Soon a glorious mist will come
To drench this void and chase away
My blues

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Thank you Bear

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This was amazing!
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderfully expressed...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and amazing write. And i love the structure you made up in every stanza.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely done.. love the imagery and flow of this piece.. great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

All in good time, no one can rush another, push them it has to be natural and when the time is right it will happen. There are no time tables or rules to this life, it is what it is. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know this cycle all too well…Being too high or too low is the norm in my life; it is the in-between that calls to my heart…This piece hit close to my heart Neva! A favorite sure!

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem neva!
it's always good to chase away the blues!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

agree with reviews beautiful poem !

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Once again another great poem, that shows deep emotions that grip the reader. Excellent work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the tone of this piece, it has a longing, melancholy to it that is sometimes hard to capture but you did a superb job. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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