Kneeling Down in Time

Knelt down in time, who can say, that life is not forever glowing 

Without doing a full circle inside spaces in their mind

When circumstances do question the proudest man’s sight

On amazing nights, when the full moon is his to find

Can the bottom of your heart get tangled up in winds that stay

Then step inward to wonder why the sky’s not blue

As those thoughts and desires from that one minute past

Softly trickle drop by drop and hold on tight to you

Is this the way it’s always been, just how the deep sea roars

When unexpected words leave nothing but replies

That softly caresses everything you cannot  look upon

Even though you hear it whisper in another’s eyes

Are they never to be thought of, or even touched by our hearts

Without doing full circles inside spaces in our minds

When circumstances question the proudest man’s sight

Will he come untangled, kneeling down in time

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Neva,
I always love the way you tie things up so neatly and precise...you have such an art of doing that...repeating just enough to remind us where we've been in your heart and your mind...it's refreshing and beautifully done....all the time...
Another great write....
allen

[joshua deathdealer]

A deep and outstanding write....I love it.

[∂αʌ<..]

Can the bottom of your heart get tangled up in winds that stay
>>>my favourite line in this poem!
a very deep poem! awesome!

[Lily Mae]

A great question Neva.. the untangling of a man in body, mind and spirit....xx

[Kenneth The Poet]

Cool work for sure. This is one your best, Neva. It's dark, foreboding, and awesome.

[Dream Weaver]

Very insightful....An interesting ponder but who's to say
and who's to decide...Lovely imagery Neva...

[brenda]

love it !!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Wow, made sooo much sense every line has wisdom and depth. Terrific:)

[Ruth]

Neva, as always, you console me and make me think..this is powerfully worded..so much in life not embraced, this is so beautiful..I run out of words to compliment your art :) xx