Mornings Secret

The sunrise

What secret
did the wind just share
to make the sun
blush so sweetly.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Cherrie!
Loving in the warmth of sunrise ⁓ what could be sweeter!

One never knows what a conspiring wind and sun will come up with, but it's sure to be something beautiful … just like your delightful Free Verse poem.
I like the flow of this, the creatively original imagery, and gently suggestive thought it invokes.
For softer, more proper grammatical appeal, consider ending with the action adverb "sweetly", rather than with the adjective "sweet … ie: "to make the sun blush so sweetly".

Whatever, I'm (obviously) smitten! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Cherrie Palmer]

Ya know Richard, I tried it both ways and need to look at it once again.
:) and thank you for the suggestion I appreciate it very much.

[Richard🖌]

I am always happy to read your poetry, Cherrie … you're such a gentle joy! : )

[Lanny]

Such a fresh little, enjoyable poem!

What a pleasure to read it.

All the best,

Lanny

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Lanny

[Dave]

This is deliciously beautiful.

Take care - Dave

[CD Campbell]

Short, positive, and sweet. Well written verse. I loved it.

[Paul Bell]

Are you somewhere hot?
Just read the word sun. So exciting.
Don't even mind blushing.
Okay, back in the Igloo.

[Cherrie Palmer]

No heat, but a sunny 32

[Neville]

whatever it was, we owe both the wind and the sun a favour...this is just so sweet :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

I wish I would have taken a picture but some how I didn't think of it till it was to late.

[Neville]

it always happens doesn't it, I've lost count of the times I wish that I had a camera handy:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

not easy to embarrass the sun, for sure.
I like the personification and metaphor here in this wonderfully concise write...allows us to take this places with our own secrets...or those secrets we either wish we knew or are glad we don't.

perfect!

j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you J.
I like letting the reader be the final element.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Must have been a very intriguing clandestine whisper - love the short and sweet - always says more than the words expressed - nice on ... :-)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Good morning and Thank you Phil