Dream

http://lttf06.podbean.com/mf/web/mnrsut/Dream1.mp3

 

As the sun falls to slumber

And the moon reaches peak

I know you will think of me

Dream as you sleep

Shallow graves weigh your mind 

I shall shelter wisdom

I shall praise knowledge

I crave acceptance

Gain access to my heart

Earn the freedom of my soul

Great lover of stars

Loose tongue of man

I feel the attraction

But I am what I am

Reviews

[Dane Osborne]

beautiful and hypnotic. This had an amazing flow and it had exellent wordplay that put me in a trancelike mood as I read it. Well done 100/100

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow! I can relate to this piece because I feel dreams are form of communication with the power above we call God.
Excellent write.

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. and you are super awesome ... profound ... poetic ... sensitive ... and you have quite a way with words ... plus ... i agree ... a loose tongue is indeed attractive ... :P ...

[KAREN]

I really liked this one! I say be yourself!!

[Jibey]

I didn't feel quite sure of the answer to the enigma but I felt the smooth flow of the words and the conviction of the poet...

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the last line of this poem and I love the scene you paint before my eyes with these crafty words.

[Ed Hart]

and you are often and always more

[Lydia Blackwell]

This is excellent. It is mystifies, then indulges, then mystifies again. I read it three times and each time, I liked it more. Very nice addition to your poetry!