Immortalise

Lack of dust to tell our tale

Of lives we lived,

Boats we did sail

And so in words

Immortalise

Our lessons learned

Our fulfilled lives

 

The stars are watching

The walls have ears

None shall quiet

Our invisible fears

And so in words

Immortalise

Our lessons learned

Our fulfilled lives

Reviews

[Dane Osborne]

A well written piece. It's like we bemoan the pain of enduring exsitence but that's also how we learn to evolve and also learn to appreciate. That's just what I got from this.Well done and kudos

[.]

. ah, words ... they are so empowering ... i think if they could, they'd just thank you for these lines ...

And so in words
Immortalise
Our lessons learned
Our fulfilled lives

[Ed Hart]

and so the only measure of our lives is the quality of their echo as the immediacy of our 'now' dissolves in the sea of time...you expressed your thoughts with assurance and explicitly