Good Morning

Good Morning

A Poem by The Pain Stays Fresh

I wake to the sound
of chirping birds outside my window.
Such a happy sound.
It brightens my day and puts a spring in my step.
The sun is shining
as if to say "Have a happy day, today."

© 2012 The Pain Stays Fresh


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well, i love this poem much than my poem...lol, it's nice piece. I wanna read more if you'll continue it...

Posted 6 Years Ago


The Pain Stays Fresh

6 Years Ago

Thanks. That's sweet. :)
Wórdsmíth

6 Years Ago

well, it should be sweet for sweet girl...:)
This was so cheerful it actually put me in a better mood, nice write

Posted 6 Years Ago


The Pain Stays Fresh

6 Years Ago

Haha. Thanks. I don't know what possessed me to write it. I hate mornings.
RachelReaper

6 Years Ago

all of my friends are the same way.
lovely positive vibe

Posted 6 Years Ago


You put such a positive spin out of something I've never enjoyed and you painted a picture with your words while you did it. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The Pain Stays Fresh

7 Years Ago

Thanks. :) Sorry it took me a while to get back to you. Just lost my internet and I'm doing everythi.. read more
Green

7 Years Ago

Not a problem
Any day I wake up is a happy day... love the positive vibe of the poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Pain Stays Fresh

7 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
Short, simple, and sweet. The only hiccup I could find is the comma in the last line. Seems to tamper with your rhythm.
Keep up the good work!
~The Wilted Rose

Posted 7 Years Ago


A beautiful ode to the start of a day of wonders. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cheyenne, thank you for the review and you keep up the good work!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


wowww..you have drawn so nice beautiful images here..your poem is very cheerful and optimistic...i really like mornings with sounds of birds but i didnt know that they were saying goodmorning...i like your poem sooo much, nicely written

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the tone of this poem and the way it started and concluded. Just lovely

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on June 14, 2012
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The Pain Stays Fresh

Alma, AR



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I'm a total black sheep. I love reading, writing, talking, music older than I am, and watching old westerns on rainy days. I prefer writing stories and short poetry. You'd think by reading some of my.. more..

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