A Night Rainbow, The Moonbow

A Night Rainbow, The Moonbow

A Poem by Confuser
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Waiting for Love

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Night’s Rainbow, The MoonBow

A rainbow glistened in a dark sky

Spreading through starlight

Thunder roared as lonely clouds

Ripped into the atmosphere

Upon my wave of hopefulness

I search for you my dear

 

Miraculous Lights twinkle

Gleaming brilliant colors flow

Into my pleading heart and soul

I’ll wait forever, never to let go

Many years and many days

But nothing changed your plane

 

I danced for sweet rain to bring

You near, for the rare Moon’s

Bow to appear �" now I see

It’s half ring hidden in my memory

 

A hundred different ways to collide

With my propensity to laugh and cry

Waiting for drops to take my pain

Pretending my meek measures would

Make you smile, but life’s too short

For lonely clouds these parched days

 

Longing I asked the moon to come down low,

But the hellcats of hullabaloo said “oh no no”

You need only a mist to see his rainbow

Tenderly embrace our dark paradise

It calls for love’s blissful guise

© 2015 Confuser


Author's Note

Confuser
Moonbow rises at night, rarity: Just thoughts...Thanks in advance for reading/any reviews guidance are always appreciated. I made changes....like this version better. Hope you do...A Moonbow is a rare phenomenon

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Rainbow produced by the reflection of the moonlight, Moonbow, certainly a rare but must be a beautiful natural phenomenon.
Loved your imagery, the first 10 lines are my favourite, especially the given part is more than beautiful,

Thunder roared as lonely clouds
Ripped into the atmosphere
Upon my wave of hopefulness
I search for you my dear.

Well done, dear Dale.

armin. ...

Posted 4 Years Ago


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moon beams guiding your path,as you search the cosmos for your love

Posted 1 Year Ago


edging on mysticism and the allure of lingering love. incredible imagery and description. Your use of words moulds it into a well crafted piece. I enjoyed this thoroughly

Posted 2 Years Ago


Never seen a moonbow obviously...but still, the very thought of looking at something so beautiful and rare....nature is so so so beautiful in my opinion...its beauty surpasses everything...nature and its many elements and phenomena have always inspired me as a poet...I can see that they inspire you too..
This sure is a very beautiful and poignant write!
Favourite lines: "It’s half ring hidden in my memory"...they are certainly not the heart of the piece but they really stood out for me...:))
 



Posted 3 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful and picturesque writing . I love the imagery and the Poem makes Love seem like a Phenomenon. Truly awesome! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ethereal and emotive poem. I love the imagery of the Moonbow.

Posted 3 Years Ago


this is an exquisite poem. Beautiful lines and saturated with emotion. The italicized lines offsetting the stanzas. A hope deferred write. Wonderful to read. Sad, but wonderful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Skillfully you carved up a brilliant poem a moon Bow more like moon glow and old song from the forties a big band classic I am proud to of read about it here in your poem Moonbow Loved your skillful words no pun intended I respect your works and your writings are great Sweet Lady.

Posted 4 Years Ago


you painted some lovely images here

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very beautifully penned, exquisitely filled with imagery delightfully envisioned, painting a mental image within your reader's mind that causes one to almost feel that they are there and can see what your heart penned to page sees in the creativity zone of your mind ... I enjoyed it more even than the first time my eyes were blessed to chance upon this delightful piece of poetry ...

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lovely written many charming words to make me love and understand what was happening on a very special night that brings such beautiful poetry to light. Your words are very descriptive in a pleasant way.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on June 11, 2015
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Tags: lonely, love, longing, hoping for change, waiting, mystery, witches

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Confuser
Confuser

Manning, SC



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