Torn

Torn

A Poem by Crazo14

Sitting here
Having so much pain inside and out
Not knowing how much damage you caused me
Tears like blood on the ground
Not able to say I'll be safe
You don't want to see my face
Killing my feelings not able to see my heart
You played with my heart like it was nothing
Showing me you don't care when you just walked away
Feels like I've been torn to shreds
Im like a dust in the wind
Fire burning all the pictures
Wanna just lay in a grave
Not able to sit straight
Cring like my eyesare falling out mt head
Tired of being hurt and played

© 2011 Crazo14


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Yet another brillant piece. People never try to look past the mask to see what they are truly doing to one another

Posted 9 Years Ago


There is a lot of emotion in between the lines.
Another good writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


... I understand... I would like you to pour more out at a time.... let me show you something. Check your mail.

Posted 9 Years Ago


there's so much emotion in each line, its like they're bullet firing at the reader, it really emphasizes the importance of each emotion felt by the writer, while writing. nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tired of being hurt and played
So sad:( You did a beautiful job with writing the feelings of being torn

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aw, very emotional... :(
But nice poem... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was very sad but good detail you can feel the pain in the words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Deep imagery and strong feeling! Enjoyed reading your words :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is going into my favorites. I can really relate to this, there's a few grammatical errors by the way. But other than that, fantastic job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Crazo14
Crazo14

Erwin, TN



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I write pretty much any kind of poem. From my experiences to some short stories. So befriend me and no regrets just some good friendships and more more..

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