The push I need

The push I need

A Poem by Crazo14

Going for it all
Putting everything I need into it
But one vacant spot in my heart is empty
No one there to cheer me on
No one I know to watch me become all I can be
Pushing it hard with a vacant spot in my heart
Feeling the pain having no one to believe in me
Not having the push inside of me
Hard to tell far from what I can see
To overcome all odds
Tears like sweat from my eyes
No its not from the pain
But the thing not able to believe in myself

© 2011 Crazo14


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Great deal of emotion in such a short poem, and it's relatable, always a good aspect in a great poem. Good job

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love how you pour your emotions out for all to see. It is a very brave thing. One that not many do. The emotion in your pieces is amazing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This has a lot of emotions in it. I've been there to, not believing in myself. It is hard. Great write, Crazo14:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Real, Strong, Well tempered... I respect this piece because it is blunt, Very masculine and request no apologies from the reader. It's rare to find an Actual poem that has intrigue and mystery but comes of so... Matter of fact!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is a great write to explain the feelings of someone who is missing motivation. I completely understand where you went with this, and it flowed very nicely. Great job :)
~Chey

Posted 9 Years Ago


This saddened me, which is hard to do. Pain can be the best inspiration for our poetry and writing, and this is a true example. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is sad but well expressed.


Posted 9 Years Ago


waaaaah, it is so sad...... but amazing.....
"But one vacant spot in my heart is empty
No one there to cheer me on" I love this lines....... ^^,

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aw, so sad...But well written...

Posted 9 Years Ago


I feel ya. im the same way. No matter how much support you may have and good you may be, if you don't believe in yourself than nothing matters. You have believe that you can do it in order to keep your dream alive and to fight and possibly achieve it. But it all starts with you, and it always will.

This poem seriously made me cry. It hit a part of my heart because I have been struggling with the same problem. And it's has taken a very long time for me to actually give myself a chance to go for my dreams.

I hope you go and achieve your dreams and I hope that you give yourself a chance to believe in yourself.
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Posted 9 Years Ago



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I write pretty much any kind of poem. From my experiences to some short stories. So befriend me and no regrets just some good friendships and more more..

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