Your Eyes

Two eyes,
Beautiful,
And dark,
How,
How can these beautiful,
Sweat eyes,
Hurt me,
So much,
Just by,
Looking,
How,
How can they,
Make me feel,
Like a ghost,
Like I don't,
Even exist.

Author's Note

i really don't know

Reviews

[Gabbie Smolarek]

You've managed to evoke alot of emotion, I love it!

[.......]

such a sad write, I've felt this way before.

[Dream Weaver]

Truly a sadly beautiful write.
the 6th line "sweet" instead
of (sweat)

[Mica]

interesting way of breaking it up...
very nice though!
I think I know what/WHO you are referring to... ;)

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

That's so sad. I've felt like that before. I liked it.;p